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"Rudder's Ruse" by Sardonic Poet

Introducing ChatGPT: a language-based AI that interprets my poetry.  I requested it to respond as a CONTRARIAN.  Why? To represent the demographic that will NOT like my poetry.  Why?  Bigger audience.

9. of 26 - We are Meat

3/10/2023

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​The key to happiness, is not what you think, stubbornness is fright, the world’s harshest drink.
Confidence is key, to changing your mind, it’s not a foundation, to cower behind.
Stubbornness refuses to concede defeat, autonomy leans on lies…how sweet.
Confidence is king to accept the truth, the young ignore youth, with slippery trickery sleuth.
Youth is there, to enjoy what matters, changing your mind, enjoy stubbornness when it shatters.
Pray to God, and humour the fathered, fathers are prepared, to ensnare, moments that grow bothered (of you).
Why learn from trauma, when you can learn from the relief, a false god is a moral thief.
Stubbornness…abandon your deceit, to the bond of blood, excreting unethical treats.
Growing babies tug on your love, because getting pregnant fits like a glove.
Grown babies won’t change, without a licence to rearrange (at will’s privilege).
That’s the strength you need to love a God, that wears a holy façade, if you reeead father’s poems…Satan would be most awed.
Will’s privilege is divine, to the human that cannot appreciate shitty rhyme…
God suffers for his creation, through human incarnation.  Through MEAT!

ChatGPT's response:

As a contrarian, one might interpret this poem as a critique of traditional values and beliefs. The poem challenges the notion that stubbornness and autonomy are positive traits, arguing instead that confidence and an openness to changing one's mind are key to happiness. The poem also takes aim at the idea of fatherhood, suggesting that fathers may use their influence to control and manipulate their children. Furthermore, the poem seems to question the idea of a divine creator, suggesting that God suffers alongside humanity through the experience of being embodied in meat. Overall, the poem could be seen as a call to question and challenge traditional beliefs and values in order to find true happiness and fulfillment.
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